Kia Ora James, Your letter is very convincing with all the reasons you give for why Michelle should help us. I could tell what the letter was about straight up too because you used an introduction. Well done! Can't wait to see what comes next. :)
Kia Ora James, My name is Claire from Waikowhai Primary School in room Waitemata. I really enjoyed reading your letter to Michelle. Your blog Post reminded me of when I made a letter to my parents about how War is. Maybe next time you could change the type of writing you are using so that we can read it easier. If you would like to check out my blog you can go to http://wpsclairew.blogspot.co.nz/ please feel free to comment on my blog, Blog ya later.
Kia Ora James,
ReplyDeleteYour letter is very convincing with all the reasons you give for why Michelle should help us. I could tell what the letter was about straight up too because you used an introduction. Well done!
Can't wait to see what comes next. :)
Kia Ora James, My name is Claire from Waikowhai Primary School in room Waitemata. I really enjoyed reading your letter to Michelle. Your blog Post reminded me of when I made a letter to my parents about how War is. Maybe next time you could change the type of writing you are using so that we can read it easier. If you would like to check out my blog you can go to http://wpsclairew.blogspot.co.nz/ please feel free to comment on my blog, Blog ya later.
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